All Comments on 'Seven Years Since The Motel Ch. 04'

Actually very good. You've unusual talent. Keep writing.

Very good, but WHAT HAPPENED THE NEXT MORNING?!?! You're going to wait until, like ch. 15 to tell us, right? :)

Eagerly await the next chapter, don't make it so long this time :)

Oh, I have to admit.... I sort of love how you're drawing this out and delivering bits and pieces of the whole. Instant gratification can't compare to build up and payoff!!

Keep up the great writing. Can't wait for the next chapter!

GeorgeR

can't wait for the next part keep up the great work

The gorgeously erotic sex was well worth the wait. You rendered it with a specificity that brought it beautifully to life. All the fumbling and hesitation gave it a splendid realism. Most importantly, you conveyed the irresistible chemistry between Maisie and Alessandro. That's what made the sex and romance memorable.

Sigh. My self-control's completely in tatters at this point. I'm heading off to the next chapter immediately. I just wanted to express my admiration before moving on.

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