All Comments on 'Sex at the Summer Solstice'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Somehow , this was fun.

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 7 years ago
Nice.

Solid craft. Good character dialog. Adept gymnastics descriptions. :+))

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Patty?

Good, but there's a reference to a Patty that might not be intentional.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good writing

I feel the story was nice but lacks a bit of foreplay fun, to be precise how a first timer would behave... I enjoyed it though.

ironfelixironfelixover 7 years agoAuthor
Oops! Thanks for the catch

Thanks to Anonymous for catching that name glitch. This story was originally written for my own personal interest a long time back, then re-written and submitted at last thanks to the encouragement of a dear friend. In the process of changing names (for unrelated reasons) I missed one. Lesson learned!

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Older chubby male, quite shy in person, but articulate and respectful here.