by ironfelix
Solid craft. Good character dialog. Adept gymnastics descriptions. :+))
Good, but there's a reference to a Patty that might not be intentional.
I feel the story was nice but lacks a bit of foreplay fun, to be precise how a first timer would behave... I enjoyed it though.
Thanks to Anonymous for catching that name glitch. This story was originally written for my own personal interest a long time back, then re-written and submitted at last thanks to the encouragement of a dear friend. In the process of changing names (for unrelated reasons) I missed one. Lesson learned!