All Comments on 'Sex Club for Nerds and Geeks Ch. 16'

Too Long!

Your writing is fine. I was confused because of the switch to a different universe. "Nothing between us" was/is one of my favorite stories also. In it, Jennifer is a virgin when she gets nailed by Jake. Her prior experience included only having her breasts caressed and having given a blow job. If this was a prequel, then she would've had to have regrown her hymen between this incident and her return back to Jake. If you're not going to stick to the storyline, let a person know! If you had stayed with the storyline, it would have been 4 or 5 stars rather than the 2 given. Please keep writing though.

I think you meant Van Gogh, he was the one who cut off his own ear, and not Gauguin, who was more known for his sexual escapes with young girls.

Why is this a chapter in your "sex club" story?? Shouldn't it be its own story since it has nothing to do with that story? Makes very little sense to me...

This is not a backstory but an alternative history. Was disappointed with the recreation of history because of your use of the backstory line. I downgraded the rating because of the lead in not really describing what you were going to do. I still enjoy your stories.

In the story "Nothing Between Us" Jennifer confesses to Jake that her boyfriend in college and her fooled around but that she was still a virgin. I know different authors, different takes, but if you were going to do some background with Thuy (Jennifer) you should have re-read the story to get your facts straight.