All Comments on 'Sex for Silence'

It was perfect. From the characters and their development, to the execution of the plot line. Please keep this going. Panther fan.

If that was your first story then you have done a fine job !

thanks for submitting

Great job of detailing a dead end job, catching the perpetrator and handing out punishment. Would love to see what “tomorrow” brings...

I wish I was that secretary... I'd let you have your way with me every day....

awesome when is part two?

How about a part two?

It's hard to believe that this is your first writing attempt here. I'm no expert, but for me your plot and character development were near perfect. And even more importantly, for this forum, the sexual encounters and motivation were spot on!

Please keep writing!

Tom

Fabulous how you describe the dreary scene, the small limited world of a small company, the characters high in colour. Just love it. And the sex scenes? I say: wow! Just: WOW!

Either you are a professional writer or a natural born pro, but this is so far above all the "this is my frist attempt at...." on this site.... Great stuff, well served.

Damn that was hot, perfect mix of outrage and unwilling desire.

I think she likes you, as much as she fears you. Hell Sam shaved her snatch (!) for you. Do us proud. No retreat, no surrender

Outstanding! You describe the sex better than most. 5 stars

Sounds like the beginning of a beautiful relationship and a grand sexual adventure. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.