All Comments on 'Sex, Guns, and Space Piracy Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
More please!!!

SlofredSlofredabout 3 years ago

I expected some shenanigans with the turret operation and the target practice. But this was over the top. Great ending to a very good story. 5 stars. Will wait patiently for the next installment.

Gremlin078Gremlin078about 3 years ago
Like it

Interesting, want to find out why there are “no males”

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Shockwaves?

1. No shockwaves in space.

2. Projectile guns not good. Each firing of a high velocity projectile would create an equal and opposite force pushing ship away. Lasers, Masers or electron beams make more sense.

3. Good Sci-Fi chops, but ya gotta get the details right.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Excellent. As for the no shockwaves in space...they are in a Nebula, so I am not as certain that would be true. How dense are nebula clouds? Like atmosphere dense, or the particles are still spaced enough to not bounce off of each other very much?

PornandhentaiamdsexystuffPornandhentaiamdsexystuffover 2 years ago

Very sexy, and loving the sci-fi. Would love to see more, including some lesbian and/or bisexual scenes

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