by Celsius38
His sister showed him her tit's WoW
I hate those 1 page crap stories
to what could be a very sexy story of sibling love and romance even. I hope you write some more of this story so we get to know what happens next.
In that they could've done more than just showing some tits. I was expecting sex but okay. Clickbait title
I can give one positive piece of feedback about what little exists of this story: luckily this isn't another story where the virgin brother has a 10" cock and is a sex-God 6 times a day.
A little slow but not too bad. Definitely keep going!
And ignore the haters...
Hi, yes it was short and yes it was a tease but you are a good writer and I hope you write more. Got me hard...
Good story. Well written. I was happily in the story because it was believable. Very erotic even without actual sex. It read like an opening chapter and I can't wait to read more.
Just to repeat what others have said, shows some potential for a nice loving and tutoring relationship - please just keep Justin’s size to a reasonable dimension.
The “gee, I never would have guessed my baby bro was hung like a horse” shtick is way over done.
A funny and potentially sexy story. It's a pity that some of the not-so-smart commenters here haven't yet figured out that this may just be the first chapter.
Please don't leave us hanging. This is a great start and I'd love to see more of this story.
I forgot to add to an earlier anonymous comment that as part of Alice's conditioning regimen for Justin's training program she might want to investigate - and later demonstrate - the therapeutic powers of the English Cucumber cleansing massage.
It's much more realistically sized for the task than a zucchini.
or so I've been told
I hope this is the first of several chapters. As far as the person that commented that your story sucked, that person is an idiot. Keep writing! Looking forward to future chapters.
Great story line with potentially very interesting characters. I am very much looking forward to the next episode (and many more, please).
Very inciting, so we need to continue with this, yes? Good story so far. Let's proceed with Chapter 2. After all, it's been almost 10 days since you first posted.