by movieye
THIS CAN MEAN WAR, THERE HAS TO BE A PT.3 and PT.4...IT'S TOO HOT TO STOP NOW . YOU MAY LOSE READERS FOR THIS BLUNDER. PT.1 and PT.2 WERE GOOD READS WHY STOP NOW..THANKS FOR 1+2
In the first story Dr. Turner was a women. In this story you made the Dr. a male. Part 2 paragraph 5 "he gave Adam what looked like ----" Sorry to nitpick, but it gave me a chuckle.