by MrsJ
It's been a while since this chapter was published, so please don't let this be yet another 'unfinished' story - please !
You need to bring in a series of boys of different sizes and ages, to give further determination of the difference of men/boys
We read these stories to get aroused and visualize what's happening, sort of live in the moment you set up. You totally bypassed the whole experience for Laura, but I don't know why. I really enjoy the way you write and this series but i felt really Gypped in that part of the story. Overall it's a good storyline and the characters are developed well but just one spot in the story was disappointing.
I’m ‘late to this party’ since I am new here, but I enjoyed this series and agree with the older comments:
You should continue the series.
I was really disappointed that you must have ‘given out of steam’ and did not give us the details of the later encounter with Laura.
Very well presented with appropriate transitions and though out premise My only suggestion would be: it is quite possible, given the uh unfettered attention lavished on the virgin, that her orgasm is very often attained with the right loving touches. Uncertainty is oresent, but it is very probable. You are an excelent writer and it is my intention to read all you submissions. Please continue. 5*