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by passere

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing

Keep it going in future stories!

rosspalrosspalover 4 years ago
Hottttt

What a super hot story you have going. Please keep them cummin!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

For all the sexual elements you included in the story, it should have been much longer, provided your premises that a) some of the kids were virgins (or close to), and b) the two families had no previous sexual experence with each other.

As the story is now there is just too many unusual things happening with no precedent or explanation. Too much of a mess.

Next time: Less is more!

oldhotrodderoldhotrodderover 4 years ago
Beach Vacation

Keep going! The vacations not over yet!

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