All Comments on 'Sex Quest Ch. 01'

Scared armor?

Sorry, but I couldn't take it seriously after that one. Your story has potential, but please find an editor (or at least someone to proofread) and pick up the mistakes you won't notice - but the readers will!

As a quick and dirty option, run the story through your software's grammar check (rather than just a spell check) as that'll pick up at least some of the correctly spelt but incorrect words.

And, above all, keep writing! :)