All Comments on 'Sex Shop Blow Job'

pacing is good, but there are numerous grammatical and spelling issues which hurt the overall quality of your story. dialogue also feels stilted.

there's potential here, though, so keep it up.

So hot. Such a naughty idea and the build up was so well written. My favorite part was: "Daniel got straight down to action by immediately dropping to his knees, thereby relieving me of imposing my 'no kissing' rule. He quickly undid the buckle of my belt, popped the buttons on my jeans and eased them down my legs. I could hear his breath quicken in anticipation, and he was just as excited by this random encounter as I was.

"What a beautiful cock," Daniel wondered as my hard cock stared him in the face.

"It's all yours," I replied, nerves tighter than steel ropes.

For several seconds, Daniel simply looked at my cock and balls, examining them in wonderment. His breathing on them was exhilarating. Was he teasing me? Time seemed to slow to a crawl as I waited for him to act.

With my breath held and pulse racing, Daniel delicately took hold of my shaft base and took a long lick of the underside with his tongue.

I nearly fainted from the sensation.

"You like that?" Daniel asked rhetorically after several passes.

"Don't tease me!" I gasped.

Daniel chuckled in response before engulfing my whole length in his mouth. My legs buckled as darts of pleasure shot through me.

For the next five minutes or so, Daniel used his hands, mouth and throat to deliver one of the best blow jobs ever experienced. He tongued and sucked on my balls while jacking my cock and used a considerable amount of saliva. On occasion, when he gagged, Daniel coughed up and spat on my cock and balls. Bliss!"

Keep up the great work. I jerked off so hard to this.

Interesting and intriguing. Would appreciate more with these 2 regarding their next connection. Many possibilities and I think they could become real good fuck buddies with no strings and be safe together.