All Comments on 'Sex Slave Lottery Ch. 02-04'

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jrgg43jrgg43over 3 years ago
Great story

I wish I had seen this the first time around. Is the original version available anywhere?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This story has a plot with more holes in it than a sieve. It just doesn't hold water.

Is there really a woman alive who would continue their acquaintance with a man involved in a pack rape of her? Or stupid enough to believe her rapists would delete the video they had made of her if she met their conditions? And if it was rape, then surely there would be some evidence on the video of her resisting.

Even in Fantasy Fiction Literotica La la Land that is really stretching any sense of credibility.

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Having received favorable comments and a number of helpful ideas (thank you), I am working on further chapters of "A Game for Learning about Yourself." It might take a while before further chapters are up though. Thanks to all those who made comments on the first chapters o...

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