All Comments on 'Sex Slave Lottery Ch. 07-08'

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Cindy1001 over 3 years ago

Love it again

Love it as fresh, very good and exciting reading!

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Meh

For some reason I can't stop reading but it's nothing to masturbate to, I guess I'm drawn to terrible erotica, reading 50 Shades of Grey was similar, a train wreck that I couldn't stop. It aould have been lovely if you had done a bit of proof reading before reposting it, there are so many mistakes and the writing overall is at a middle school level.

roseyfingers over 3 years agoAuthor

Dear Anonymous - Perhaps you can direct me to something you have posted so I can see what genius is like.

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Amazing

Started reading this a while ago (did not read the original) and it’s just gotten better over the chapters!

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Having received favorable comments and a number of helpful ideas (thank you), I am working on further chapters of "A Game for Learning about Yourself." It might take a while before further chapters are up though. Thanks to all those who made comments on the first chapters o...

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