by WFEATHER
Beautiful story with much detail and at the same time written nicely short and pointedly
Great work which makes curious for the next part ;)
The title and description made me think this story would be about aliens and domination, when it seems it was really just alot of human lesbian sex. I suppose it was good in that respect, but the title and description really gave little indication as to what the story contained. Maybe you could put more aliens, or a more accurate description in the next one, to better cater to your fans?
"I know many who would truly enjoy seeing a human female cry." This quote says it all, really :-(
Good to read, enjoyable, I just don't get the thrill of BDSM.