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TheRedChamberTheRedChamber4 months ago

I entered through My Home Activities so didn't see the description:

Me one third of the way down page one - I see where this is going, don't see how it's going to take six pages though.

Me two thirds of the way down page two - Oh...okay...that's not where...

Me on page two - okay, we're kind of back where I thought, but Kumquat's forgotten the Valentine's angle.

Me on page six - god-dammit.

KumquatqueenKumquatqueen4 months agoAuthor

Thank you, @TheRedChamber ! Glad you weren't disappointed by a lack of Valentineness. Valentinity?

Ade and Dan celebrated Valentine's about 10 years earlier, as described in Steak And A Blow Job Day, and the Turkish holiday referenced is in the story Turkish Delight.

They met in the series Smoking Hot, and appear in a few other stories - GM ones are Undergraduate Experiments, and After the Funeral.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Following your dialogue style was a challenge . . .Had a hard time getting through the pages without backing up and re-reading sections to figure out what was going on.

BramblethornBramblethorn4 months ago

Laughed out loud when poor Ade inadvertently activated Safety Engineer mode.

KumquatqueenKumquatqueen4 months agoAuthor

Thanks, @Bramblethorn! But aren't we glad he did?

KumquatqueenKumquatqueen4 months agoAuthor

To Anonymous: all the best things in life are challenging, sweetheart.

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Once upon a time, I was born. I've lived. I've fucked. I've played. Sex and BDSM are my hobbies. I looked for realistic stories I like - it's a problem being British and thus repulsed by the word 'panties' - and eventually figured I'd polish up some stories I've written over t...