All Comments on 'Sex Toy Taste Testing'

What a self-serving bitch. I would have told her to return them herself and that he hopes she has a great time taking care of her own needs because he won't be there to help.

You've got her buying 6 different toys but you don't even describe them all, let alone what is done with them. Disappointing ending to what could have been a great story.

Short stories can be great. This one isn't though. It's confusing, it doesn't have any proper action, it's utterly meaningless. The idea isn't that bad, maybe you shall consider rewriting it.