All Comments on 'Sex Under the Moonlight'

This tale is a work of art

Wonderful story

a 12 year old boy an a 32 year old woman?

I just couldn't read past the age difference between Ashton and the guy - her 32 and he 12?? Too bad. The first paragraph started out fairly promising. There were a couple of questionable, oddly-written sentences that I was willing to ignore. Then the math didn't add up and that's where you lost me. No rating from me.