by sapio2sexual
Liked this stream of consciousness; intriguing but not as erotic as you might expect given what is seen/smelled until his closing climax. Not as tumescent as could be. Minor observation: verb “filled” used three times in first two sentences. Hope you share more of your vivid imagination.
More phylosophy than erotica. No progression, no plot - merely floating ideas in some undefined space brushing on erotic concepts. I'm also not into golden showers.