All Comments on 'Sex with a Sailor Pt. 01'

by VickiMontclairandMitchStPaul

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txcoatl1970txcoatl1970over 9 years ago
Nice nautical romance!

Thanks for returning me to the Gulf Coast of Florida.

I got a massive kick out of the Trav Mcgee series boating around Florida as well as hairy-chested adventures in the 1960's and 70's.

Loving where you're going with this!

John and Joanna are a fun couple to be with!

Weird how you reversed the Meyer-Travis dynamic where Marty's the happy-go-lucky one vs John the savvy player, but hey, your story, your choices.

I'd love to read more!

next stop- Key Wasted!

photog112photog112over 9 years ago
Great start

Great start to the story. Really interested to see where it goes from here.

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 9 years ago
nice, sexy and romantic

I'm eagerly awaiting ch. 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wow wow wow

Amazing plot and characters. great sex stuff as well . looking,forward for more of the same.

LyndolynLyndolynover 9 years ago
Confusing format

Would be greatly improved by omitting or dramatically reducing the number of narrator changes. They're redundant and confusing.

VickiMontclairandMitchStPaulVickiMontclairandMitchStPaulover 9 years agoAuthor

Hi all,

We decided to publish Books 2 through 5 on Amazon.com (as well as book one). You are welcome to check out these books there. Happy reading!

http://www.amazon.co.uk/-/e/B00O5LOSHQ

https://www.amazon.com/author/vicki_montclair

jenellesljenelleslabout 2 years ago

The swapping characters can work, but most was just a repetition. I love the story. I hope this isn't the end.

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