by VickiMontclairandMitchStPaul
Thanks for returning me to the Gulf Coast of Florida.
I got a massive kick out of the Trav Mcgee series boating around Florida as well as hairy-chested adventures in the 1960's and 70's.
Loving where you're going with this!
John and Joanna are a fun couple to be with!
Weird how you reversed the Meyer-Travis dynamic where Marty's the happy-go-lucky one vs John the savvy player, but hey, your story, your choices.
I'd love to read more!
next stop- Key Wasted!
Great start to the story. Really interested to see where it goes from here.
Amazing plot and characters. great sex stuff as well . looking,forward for more of the same.
Would be greatly improved by omitting or dramatically reducing the number of narrator changes. They're redundant and confusing.
Hi all,
We decided to publish Books 2 through 5 on Amazon.com (as well as book one). You are welcome to check out these books there. Happy reading!
http://www.amazon.co.uk/-/e/B00O5LOSHQ
https://www.amazon.com/author/vicki_montclair
The swapping characters can work, but most was just a repetition. I love the story. I hope this isn't the end.