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All Comments on 'Sex with my First Love Pt. 01'

by buxyjoo1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Could have been better

Reads more like an instruction manual

The use of "I" far to many times , put more soul in your writing

buxyjoo1buxyjoo1over 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks for your feedback

Thanks for the feedback. I look at every feedback to improve my writing. I really appreciate you taking the time to give your suggestions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Interesting story

Something I wished once to do only with the girl I loved.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nice one

Beautiful story

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I love the passion and energy a girl brings to the bed. I mix philosophy with love and lust. You'll love me for it. Let's talk and see where we go. Drop me a message. I understand *discreet*.