All Comments on 'Sex with Sister Ch. 02'

Very hot story Well done my friend

although it lacked animal-heat.

i feel you could have explored the character of the sisters friend, {what she thought about it, that it was a little wierd maybe, but she couldnt help it}

i feel there should have been a little more emphasis on the 'lust' aspect of this whole affair,his craving.

the main guys character is great, perfectly fits, i do wish the story was longer and had more 'fire'!

great effort though.

although it lacked animal-heat.

i feel you could have explored the character of the sisters friend, {what she thought about it, that it was a little wierd maybe, but she couldnt help it}

i feel there should have been a little more emphasis on the 'lust' aspect of this whole affair,his craving.

the main guys character is great, perfectly fits, i do wish the story was longer and had more 'fire'!

great effort though.

You lucky devil, you experienced every guy's dream. Next time you won't be able to keep your hands off them, as you realise that their needs are the same as yours.

Nice story.

again use a good editor before posting

DBRS

if the girl friend couldn't have sex due to her oeriod why is she there the next day? do some research before posting and keep it realistic and believable please this needs a rewrite now.

"Was starting to stop resisting." What kind of a sentence is this? This is just an example of the errors in the story. The story is not bad - it's not a five star story, but it's not bad - but the errors take away from the pleasure of reading it. Previous commenters suggested that you should get an editor; they were right!