All Comments on 'Sex with Sister Ch. 03'

HOPE THAT WAS NOT THE END OF THE STORY AS THE STORY IS STILL INTERESTING.

i found it great until the part where he ass fucked her when she didn't want him to that was a bit disturbing like rape

That was one of the best stories i have read yet!

I like to see it go on, maybe even let Dad at sis also?

She hot little bitch, she need all the cock she can get!

LisaSmurf

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Incredibly simplistic - reads like it was written by a 14yo.

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good but the ass bashing ruined it

why do all you writers think ass bashing is sexy and in this case it was nothing but rape you totally ruined a good story with the ending what a waste

you had to get in the rape and anal stuff. There are sections for each of those. There are a lot of readers that don't like anal, as you can see from the responses. There were other problems, with grammar and word usage. An editor would be a help there, and would not take anything from your story [except errors]. The stories are simplistic, but you're just starting -- you'll become more expert. Just quit writing about asses!

to all you buthurt little fags complaining about anal...get some fucking balls! it's anal, and besides, technically, she raped him, then he got his own back

burn for a burn, that's in the bible!

good story overall, hope that's not the end :]

loved all three chapters keep the good work coming

In response to the above comment about the "burn for a burn" being in the bible, who cares? The bible is a load of shit and should be filed in the fiction section.

Thes stories are just sex - not really stories. As such, they become rather boring after a bit. Well done as sex descriptions, but please give us a story.

I'd like to see more stories in this epic seriers

I was wondering why you had his sister lick the girlfriends pussy when she was on her period when her brother didnt

Is a whinny pussy. He is hiding from his nympho sexy sister cause he doesn't want to fuck her yet he does. His character ruined this story for me. Whinny little bitch