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The silken fabric of my gown swishes around me as I walk, caressing my naked curves. I look up at you and smile as I feel one more drop of yours escape my warmth to slowly slide down my inner thigh. You put your arm around me and I snuggle into your embrace as we walk back to rejoin the party.
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…and here’s what is happening elsewhere at the party that I would learn about later, events that would have a, shall we say, memorable impact on the rest of my evening…
Off in a semi-secluded corner just off the veranda, Richard pulls his smartphone out of his pocket, the latest and highest tech model available, activated to interact directly with his home’s security system from anywhere in the world -- including of course his own backyard.
His thumb deftly scrolls through several menus before clicking a window to enlarge and play a video, leaving the sound muted. Richard studies the two figures embracing on his library balcony, watching their silent and increasingly amorous interactions with an intrigued smile on his face.
“Look, Marin,” he says, turning to show the phone screen to his fiancée, a ravishing petite blonde with a curvy figure and what I would soon learn to be a wickedly creative imagination. “That’s the friend I wanted you to meet.”
“Oh, I’m sure he’s very nice and all, but I think we’rereally going to enjoy getting to knowher,” she chuckles as the two of them watch my bare breasts vigorously bouncing in high definition on his phone screen as you thrust behind me.
…to be continued…
[Author's note: This is a revised and significantly expanded version of a story I submitted several years ago under another username, but I lost the password to that account long ago...and came up with some naughty new ideas in the meantime. Hope you enjoy -- and yes, there's a sequel planned.]
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoBeautiful, delicious story with the promise of an exciting sequel. I understand your use of 2nd person. I do as you did for the same reason, writing for my wife. They are originally intended to be intimate stories for her. I changed recent stories to her perspective as she might tell the story to friends. I think imagining she is telling others about our escapades adds a sexy twist for me. I appreciate you sharing this intimate fantasy between you and your lover. It makes me feel a little voyeuristic, actually.
TexasKatieover 3 years agoAuthorsorry for duplicate comment...system didn't appear to take the comment the first time. oh well.
TexasKatieover 3 years agoAuthorI've never put much stock in commenters who complain about a story because they can't completely identify with the characters. The most important sex organ is the brain, and an unrestrained imagination is a powerful aphrodisiac. I've enjoyed plenty of stories that describe situations I highly doubt I would want to experience in real life, but that's the fun of fantasy.
This story originally was conceived several years ago when I was trying to relieve the stress of a long distance boyfriend dealing with a very demanding time at work. I wrote up an outline and then read it to him over the phone, hence the unusual second person narration. I have significantly expanded the story since then, but I still "hear" the story unfolding as something I'm telling him over the phone, an experience that we both enjoyed quite a lot. If you've never had anyone willing to do this for you, I highly recommend the experience!
So no apologies for sharing a personal fantasy with a wider audience, in the way that it unfolded and developed. I don't always write in this way but this story was so strongly conceived this way in my mind that it would have felt like a different story altogether to change it.
And I have a feeling it might be even hotter for some of you with active imaginations, to re-read it now and pretend I'm softly narrating it for you while you're alone in your room...enjoy!
TexasKatieover 3 years agoAuthorI've never put much stock in commenters who complain that a particular story didn't turn them on because they couldn't identify with the characters. I've enjoyed reading stories from lots of different perspectives, even some that I seriously doubt I would enjoy in real life. The most important sex organ is the brain, and an unrestrained imagination is a powerful aphrodisiac.
The origin of this story was a fun little fantasy I dreamed up several years ago for a long distance boyfriend who had a stressful job. I wrote up an outline and then read it to him over the phone. And we both had a very nice time. ;)
So criticize the unusual second person narration if you wish, it's free country, but I honestly don't care and am not going to change it for this story. I've significantly expanded the story since its original conception, but I still hear it in my mind as something I'm reading to a lover over the phone, something that was fun and arousing for both of us, and if you've never had anyone willing to do that for you, I highly recommend trying it!
