All Comments on 'SexGames Ch. 01'

Thought I would give this a run, and was pleasantly surprised. And the twist at the end was well done.

I will look for chapter 2. Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

My guess is he’s still in the simulation...

Looking forward to Chapter 2!

5*

More more!

I loved the twist ending. So many possibilities from here... surprise us!

Please keep going.

I have read most of your other stories and this one looks to be amazing! Keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapter.... But please can we have a happy ending on this one

PLEASE CONTINUE

Thank you to everyone for giving this new series a try! It's my first attempt in the Sci-Fi realm and I am really enjoying working through this concept. Thanks to everyone that has commented. Your comments are truly appreciated whether they are good or bad. Input from readers is one of the main perks of posting stories here on Lit!

@jman337 - Your theory is an interesting one that will be heavily on the mind of our protagonist in the upcoming 3rd chapter. His mind will be reeling from the latest revelation.

@Timmy4u - Thanks for your comments, I will do what I can to have this saga have a happy ending. I guess the question is, "happy for whom?" :)

We have started a Patreon account and have picked up a couple subscribers already. It is an honor that some people like these stories enough to pitch it. I appreciate your support more than words can express. I started doing this writing thing for fun, but that can change if enough people pitch in where I can start dedicating more time to my writing.

https://www.patreon.com/tallmarriedman

Thank you again for reading. Please let me know what you think about the story in the comments or by dropping me a line!

Talk about weaving a great tale and wondering where the “catch” was hidden. So far your story has been nothing but like a spider weaving a web and pulling in its dinner. Can't wait for the next chapter. Top marks from me.

I didn't see it coming quite like that. I expected something, but not quite that.

Hey TallMarriedMan, I really enjoyed reading the story. I kinda got the feeling near the end that things will not be so simple, but never expected it to turn out that way! Its great to know I still got 4 more chapters to go.

I am normally not into this kind of kink but the context of this story had me staying around just to find out how things work.

-Akhwab

I could feel my balls filling up as she teased the tip of my tongue with a quick corkscrew motion. page 3 about 2/3 of the way down the page. Still a very hot story so far,,,

Very readable, and great twist.

A very hot start of a VRand I expect also RL Story. Exciting

Great twist at the end!

Story is very well written but major points should be deducted for the terrible taste in fantasies. However this is just a story. Great work.