All Comments on 'Sexting with Naughty Mom'

You're writing a story, NOT a script. Stories use quotation marks and narrative indicating who is speaking.

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Sonam said, "Yes."

"But, I don't think you are very happy to know I am coming home,: Keshav replied.

Okay, I fucked up with my last comment regrading quotation marks. I glossed over the part that this was a series of chats, where the format does fit. Sorry.

I'm guessing English isn't your main language. I wanted to enjoy this story but couldn't. I stopped reading after a few paragraphs. Get some help making it readable and resubmit. I wish you luck

This Writer copied the whole story from "Sexting my mother" originally written by Bruce Wayne . Only thing this man changed is the name of the characters.

Something write from your own man . I don't know what were you thinking when you were editing the names .

Not bad needs some editing 4 stars for now

As someone already said this guy copied the whole story from Bruce Wayne titled "sexting my mother". People plagiarising sex stories now lol

Really true to life...have gone thru these e,options with my nephew...chennaishobs

Excellent 👌👌👌👌👌👌... Beautifully written... Very erotic... Thanks for this gem... Really enjoyed reading this

Sad to see that's the entire story is copied