All Comments on 'Sexual Maturity Ch. 01'

God damn, that was incredibly hot. Writing was good, literally the only critique I can muster is a few potential spelling mistakes.

But who was Charles?

*****What a HOT AZZ piece of storytelling. Very entertaining sex scene. Thanks for sharing.

@anon -- I'm so embarrassed right now. The random "Charles" in the story, should be "George". I edit my stories very thoroughly, and I'm shocked that I didn't catch it.

If anyone else noticed, I'm sorry! I really wish you could edit stories once they are live :(

Good story a few spelling issues but nicely written and erotic thank you

So hot! I look forward to chapter 2!

I wonder how hot a story could be, if a writer was brave enough not to use a 'monster cock' to prop up (or become the primary focus) of the story line? I have a feeling, if it ever actually happened, it might be really amazing.

Wow!!!!!!!! Excellent hot story Cunt wait for episode 2

I enjoyed your story.

Thanks for writing it.

Trusting this is the 1st chapter of Ms. Jones adventure into her sexual self discovery as a MILF, PROFESSOR, SLUT.

Great story.

She’ll never forget that fuck…so wet and deep. In the next session she’ll get sucked and suck him in return.

Nothing better than an older woman. Young and in the military, I came to believe the saying about them: They don’t swell, they don’t tell and they’re grateful as hell!

FUN

Your storytelling was top drawer, so descriptive and soooo erotic and believable. Loved the age difference and the aggressiveness of the confident young stud. Had my attention from start to finish. My only hope is that you can draw out many more chapters. TY