All Comments on 'Sexual Siblings'

I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

Really good ....You write like a pro.

I really enjoyed this! Well written great job!

I really enjoyed this! Well written great job!

very good story!

Well paced and sexy. I loved the development of the characters. Please keep writing!

good job!!! very hott!

I feel you did a very fine job for your first submission. Very good storyline and character developement. Am hoping you write more again soon.

Don't stop thair , this so sreems a sequll!!!!!

But when you gotto the sex it wasn't well enough described. Take more time. More details. Step by step by step. More foreplay before the oral sex and/or fucking.

Please help me , I just fell in love with his sister . What a great different story . Loved it . Keep it going .

very hot,reminds me of taking all my little sisters cherries growing up...nothing like family fun like that

you started good but ruined it when he started having sex and ignored his sister then totally destroyed it when she wasn't totally pissed and stayed friends with him totally unrealistic belongs in the fantacy area not here keep it believable please

it would have been better if they carried on their closeness as they grew up and focused more on romantic love between siblings than just simply sex. i hope to read something like that in ch2 & 3. :)

And very sexy.

no way would she stay friends with him he ignores her gets a girlfriend and she catches them screwing no way she would stay friends with him and when he surprised her at college she would have told him she was staying at college and to leave her alone keep it atleast sounding somewhat realistic and believable this isn't the fantacy area

loved it!!

It coulda been a really good story, but for some reason it just seemed average..

Is Lauren his current girlfriend? You never really clarified that.. You jumped from Becky to Lauren in virtually the same sentence..

The sex scene was piss-poor.. No real build up to it.. They were wet with rain, and then they stripped and were fucking..

As I said, the story had potential to be great, but you came up short..

Thank you for your writing abilities. This was very well written. I liked the build up and the story you created between the siblings. It was much more real than many of the other stories I've read on here. Keep up the good work.

My only advice, work on your scene transitions. Sometimes it was hard to tell if it was the same day, or later that evening, or what. But, that's minor and easily fixed. Keep up the good work!

a very well written tale. it has a great tease, and although the sex at the end was shorter than I like, it was great. can't wait to read the next chapter.

a very well written tale. it has a great tease, and although the sex at the end was shorter than I like, it was great. can't wait to read the next chapter.

She caught him in the fort when she was 18. Now, it’s her 19th birthday. When thinking about the incident in the fort, the brother remembers how young she was back then. What? It was less than a year ago.

for those of us without a sister,,,,,this is how i am sure a lot of us dream about.

Like Basket Weaving? Fully qualified to work off $150,000 student loan with a night job at McDonalds...