All Comments on 'Sexual Toy'

by Maggie Red Rose

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Too Much "Sex Ed" Not Enough Sex

Good subject but too much technical jargon. Readers want a fanasty not a sexual education class. Keep writing and don't feel you have to describe everthing. We know what a wet pussy is try describing how it feels like.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Hot

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