All Comments on 'Sexy Barbara Turns Her Husband On'

Barbara if she doesn't know about it. Get it rubbed in her face? This needs a closure chapter. It's not finished.

some people should not do certain things your is writing.

The best thing I've seen on Lit for quite a while. More please!

How are you able to post more than one anonymous comment?

Nothing erotic about a slut wife.

story not my interest. Still well done.

Well written, believable, interesting characters, and very very hot

an author who wants to make us believe it's ok to trample on sb.'s feelings just because she wants to. well you certainly belong to this century. are you a banker ? sounds as greedy and shameless to me.

and sexy story. The perils of a weak guy being targeted by a cock happy girl. Volatile...Mancelt.

his coming home and telling Barbara in great detail what he did and see how she reacts? And tell his wife he plans to do it again. However, no matter how accepting he is, Barbara did it for herself and not him and she LIED! Most men could never trust her again and even if they take on this lifestyle, she has revealed that she is selfish enough that if she finds someone better, she will stay with him and not Steve. The foundation, the equality of the relationship is not restored because he had sex with Tania. What Barbara did was not spontaneous, but had been planned and acted upon without consultation with her life partner. From the sounds of it, he might have accepted, but then they will never know because it was many weeks later that she finally confronts him. You are a good writer trying to justify something you think is sexy, even erotic, but in the end, regardless of their ratinalizations, Barbara knowingly cheated and did not care how her husband felt about it until much later. She really expresses no guilt over it. Interestingly, Steve says to Tania that he is noteven sure they can last as a couple at one point. Keep writing.

A waste of time about 2 contrived mistakes dressed as humans.<P>

Why do writers bother to embarrass themselves with such tripe for the very few into sick self disrespect.<P>

Who could care about those who don't care for themselves.

This is a bad day for new stories 1/22/10 I've read three crappers!!!!!!!

There's nothing worse than people leaving bad comments anonymously. Bunch of cowards. Lazy cowards at that.

This story was incredible. Not my cup of tea, mind you... I'm not generally aroused by tales of cuckoldry, but it was well-written, and delved into things beyond the sex, which took it from being porn to being erotica.

It was a bit cliched for the narrator to fuck Tania; I mean, after your wife's given you permission to sleep around, the only real reason to go and screw her lover's wife is for revenge. I would have much preferred to have him find a different woman, but that's nit-picking.

Well done.

Well, I generally don't like cheating, but you did a pretty good job of taking the hurt and pain out of it for both of the spouses. Tania was pretty broken up, you made her pain pretty evident, but can more cheating really heal.... Did you intend to give the impression that Barbara and his marriage might eventually fail because of her cheating?

Seems lots of readers get caught up in label making. They did this, so they must be cheaters. They did that, he must be.... whatever. You wrote a story with some interesting twists and turns. It won't be in the Readers Digest next month. That's Ok, I don't read the Readers Digest.

Does Steve tell Barbara?

Do they do a threesome with Tania? A foursome?

If only the once, leaving diabolical Dave all on his own once Barbara and Steve have relaunched Tania's sexual desire! Then she finds that her hubby's little dick is not enough for her and she can do much better with lads and lassies from the local gym etc. Steve wouldn't be able to keep up with both their demands so one could imagine him waiting at home to clean up after their joint nights out before they cuddle up together for a relaxing night

That was great. I thought in the first couple of pages, he was going to be a wimp, but it turns out that he got closure for her cheating with a wonderful romp of his own and helped her lovers wife too. Sharing can be hot and should be talked about before it happens, but cheating is betrayal and you can't trust a cheater. It was good that the wife talked about it after and was honest about her feeling and usually whouldn't think the cheater still wanted their spouse, but I think she proved she does. I still think she is a cold hearted loveless cunt, but at least hubby can have some fun until he divorces her cheating ass.

no likable characters. may as well read a police blotter

I didn't enjoy that ending at all. Nothing was accomplished. But I guess it didn't matter since they were both cheating and deserved each other. What a waste.

Not much of an ending or a story for that matter. Didn't seem to be a character worth a plug nickel in the whole mess. A "1".

Realized his wife is a lying, cheating slut. And probably has a cunt full of disease. It's time to divorce her before she passes along something he CAN'T divorce her. Epically stupid ending.

I saw an unloving and disrespectful wife. The husband is just a spineless cuck.

I finished the story because I was hoping for the MC to come to a sensible reaction with a BTB ending or at least a divorce. I was very disappointed because this is nothing but a perverse story of a true cuck. That is disgusting to me. Sorry, that may turn some fuckers on for getting sloppy seconds or eating a creampie. But, it's disgusting to me. How did this story get a 4+ rating????

Excerpt from the story.

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She turned to him, close but not touching him, whispering quietly. "I think it turns you on."

The words sent a dart through his mind and he said, too quickly really, "What do you mean?"

"What I said, I think my having had an affair excites you."

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Very well-written story. The first scene captures the feelings of a man who is aroused by his wife's strong sexual nature. Whether the name-calling critics like or not, some couples have these interactions and they are more erotic and sexual than the name-callers can imagine. Really well done on this one. The second scene isn't as realistic but it's still very well written and entertaining. It is unfortunate this writer hasn't added a sequel or written anything else here. Best of all is his statement about the natural preeminence of sex as a life force. I disagree with him a little about the influences that act as a drag on the sexual experience of humans, but it is a discussion our society needs to have so I applaud the writer for offering his philosophy and insight. One of the best on this platform.