All Comments on 'Sexy Games'

Great story. Love how it was actually realistic and not someone trying to inflate an ego. Love the cliffhanger at end with mom in doorway. Hope your writing more soon!

Why did you randomly switch to present tense for a chunk of the story? That was strange.

Some editing would help, though:

" faces moving ever so slowly further together. "

Towards each other? Further implies away from

Great story!

I really like your characters interactions and banter. Definitely worth following up with another chapter. 4 stars!

Now let's see how you continue the story.

Please write another chapter or ten 👍

Please continue with a part 2. Great story.

Perfect so far! Keep it real and I always like the relationship/love dynamic to come in play (as it does in real life) as story progresses. 5*

Please continue the story. Can't wait to see how you proceed with it. Getting me hard already!!

Good story but with more detailed build-up the series could be much greater story (if you continue).

Not that I didn't like your writing but i's just I see the potential.

Anyway it's enjoyable as it is so keep up the good work please.

What a fantastically written and totally erotic story

And an ending to begin something else.

We have to know what happens next...ha ha

Great writing!

I feel like I was watching a three-reeler and and the third reel was lost. I got the impression that Kelly had this in mind the whole time. Please continue with part 2. I can imagine at least three different reactions from Mom. I want to see which one you craft. Good job, though unfinished.

It's taking me time to accept a permanently fixed table in the living room after the kids have been gone for a couple years, so the story seems to lose its allure when he lays her on the table. I'm thinking a fold out table would be closer to reality and I wouldn't hump a dame on a light table.

A GF always told me to "suspend reality" but that doesn't really work.

Very nice story. Really hope there is a part 2

Was she a virgin?

Hope you continue with another chapter.

Enjoyed the game especially the strip.

Please do not leave us hanging?

Love the Ending