All Comments on 'Sexy Scheme'

by LoveofTaboo

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ThorlolThorlolabout 2 years ago

Dont know how its possible to be that hateful. Alright, they want to fuck each other but what the heck, sending someone to prison just to make it easier? I mean, she was the mother and the wife, did they feel nothing for her? Yeah I know, the story is about fucking but holy shit, how to enjoy something like that when you have two lower than scum as main characters.

cageysea9725cageysea9725about 2 years ago

I see no improvement from your last attempt to write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Next time you write something like this, include a map detailing which direction to go to follow the story! THIS SUCKED BIG TIME!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Poorly written story with so many gaps

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Badly written story!! What was the sexy scheme? How did they con Cameron and the Board? VERY WEAK INCOMPLETE STORY

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New to this, so I'm sorry if some of what I write is awkward or whatnot. I've read quite a few stories on here over the years and I debated on whether or not actually joining. As the username suggests, I'm kinda fond of the notion of 'forbidden love/lust'. But I'm also big int...