All Comments on 'Shackles Ch. 02'

Fan-fucking-tastic! Out of any vampire/werewolf/etc...stories I've ever read here this one has to be one of, if not the best I've read. I applaud your writing and look forward to more :)

P.S. The only thing that seems a tad unclear is the whole 'Agency' business. Whether or not you intend to shed light on the backdrop of the story is your choice however it may provide some clarity into the general story and why they act as they do, and how.

I know this story will have a happy ending. Right? I'll be looking for your next chapter...awesome story.

Very hot. Continues to be a great story. It seems like they might be mates. They both are feelng the same way about one another. If they are, why wouldn't Arden know about vampire mating if he's 130+ yrs old?

Nice update.

Really enjoying this story.

:)

OMG!! I cannot wait to see what happens! Very interesting story

Very hot, and I like the concept of nibbling to get blood. Why should there be anything like vampire mates (soul mates) in this story, just because most similar series have it? Maybe they are just attracted to each other. Don't feel you have to include the mate concept. Only criticism here is that you mixed up their names in the middle of the sex scene.

"Fuck the world,"

Well said guys.....GIVE THAT. AGENCY HELL!!!!

4 stars

shit in one hand and wish in the other....classic i loved it this is some good stuff keep writing.nix

ok, now i'm in love....