All Comments on 'Shadow-Cat Ch. 04'

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88nicegirl88nicegirlover 10 years ago
Please finish this story!!!!

I'm begging you!! I hate it when people don't finish stories that I really like. P.S. Your

grammar and typos problem from the first chapter has improved immensely. Is it because you found an editor? If not than you should get one just in case. I love the story so please finish it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

excuse me...can you finish one story after another.....the hangover ending really sucks

LavonyaLavonyaabout 11 years ago
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

More!!

You've got me begging for more!!!!!!

So CRUEL!!!!

88nicegirl88nicegirlover 11 years ago
Please finish!!!

A lot of good stories go unfinished and I really hope you finish this one because I love it!!! I can't wait to find out what happens!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please

I do love it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
So good!

Ik it's like a yr after but you REALLY need to finish this. It's coming along really well :O

lovemenwholovemen2lovemenwholovemen2almost 13 years ago
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please hurry i cant wait to read more!

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 13 years ago
Glad to see this!

Wow... two stories lol. Been busy during your break! Great story! Happy New Year's!

~M

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Who is Samuel? What rank does he hold? I thought he was in charge of the fighters for the Lykens. He seems to have some power and his accomodations seem more for someone of high rank than someone who leads their army. I hope we'll find out soon who he is and what Marcus wants with the Prince. I loved the inner fight between him and his wolf. I like that they aren't of one mind. The assertiveness of the wolf against its human is great. It provides a good conflict for him. How will he deal with knowing his mate is being held captive and could be in danger? That will be an even more exciting conflict.

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