All Comments on 'Shadow Dagger Ch. 16'

a nice addition for a nice story!

Felt sorry for him. That was one scary woman after him :-)

Fabulous chapter! Loved every moment of it, particularly the sword duel. Your talent is awesome!

Hihihi have to agree with JazCullen - poor Ashford but hey such is the ways of a powerful woman ;)

The fight scene was great and the lead up to this has been on point. I am starting to get curious though about Reynar. His role in all of this is starting to confuse me and I wonder if maybe he just a puppet like everyone else. I guess time and patience will tell, although I picked up the comment 'only a human' in there, I'm sure.

Request accepted LOL - I will go back and see if there have been any that I have missed.

What I love about your story is that it is refreshingly different from all the other stories on this site.I see it as a movie in my mind when I read it with The Rock as Jon heheheheh!

damn that sneaky souless scheming king. i hope he dies quickly so the marrage is never 'consumated'

I freaking love this story. Good job :)

where is ch.17???? and reynar must DIE.

A beautiful story .

Can barely wait to read the next chapter .

zero consumation, pretty please

HOW COULD YOU LET THE WEDDING HAPPEN,REYNAR IS EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!! anyways i really do like your story, although i am not happy with how some of it is turning out i cant stop reading it. oh well, guess i will have to wait and hope you kill reynar and raynolt in the most painful of ways.