All Comments on 'Shadow of a Doubt Ch. 04'

You do a beautiful job of at once capturing the moment with impeccable detail while giving us a window into Shannon's mind.

i love how you write stories for us girls, Sir, but do you have to make them end where they do? this is delicious and i want it to go on and on and on and make her do lots of naughty things god i wish i was her

WHAT!!!!!!!!!! click-click-click- like pressing the elevator button over and over........sighs...where is the mercy!? (in other words Nathan...BRAVO!!) ~*kata*~

I have to get a cool cloth now! This is the best chapter yet Sir! So very very hot.

At this moment I am wondering how on earth I am going to get up to do my chores this aroused and on these wobbly knees!

Thank You Sir

Catie/emerald

quivering ... so glad the next chapter is already written :) ... more at my fingertips *weg*

I wish this and all your stories were longer.

today iam overcome with guilt and shame

i want to cum so badly

but am fearful