All Comments on 'Shadows of Deception Ch. 05'

by Ms_Macabre

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mitchawamitchawa28 days ago

Bella's father and his temper change the dynamic of the plot. The intrigue between Bella and Roman continues unabated as he is in control, but she is also a dominant force that brings them together and keep them apart. Her battered face enrages Roman, because no one can harm his property. The negotiation with the promise of a short wait and a discussion that is to ensue is to be open and honest, as honest as it can be. Romam takes a stance when he said, "Until you're not, you're mine" and then he promises to take care of her and her mother. The search for her mother begins and punishment iwill be meted out.

GreylagGreylag24 days ago

Brilliant piece of writing twisting plots like this!

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