All Comments on 'Shadows of Deception Ch. 01'

Fucking awesome story! MOAR NOW!!! you're such a skilled, expressive writer, this stuff needs to be published.

Excellent start to the story. I’m engaged. Your attention to detail and ability to paint a vivid picture are exceptional. Looking forward to reading the next parts.

And I love your female characters. Kit blew me away, but that’s because I’ve got a soft spot for sassy women. Belladonna has definitely got my attention.

Really good stuff.

Where are all the commentators? An incredible opening, running from a drunken stud and finding more trouble than she expected Her beauty saved her life and now she's hungry. The bad guy (s) weren't too bad and she was taken home. Now we readers have to wait until the good-looking smooth guy shows up