by AgirlcalledBob
This is going to be my first piece of feedback as I have read all the chapters in one hit.
I love it!!!
I am hoping this is not the end from your comment at the beginning of this chapter and that we don't have to wait too long for the next one.
Poor Sean and Jake I hate cliff hangers though!!!
Thanks for the comment lonesomedove66 :-)
Don't worry - currently writing the next instalment. Haven't quite decided on the closer but it will have a resolution of some kind, promise!
I didn’t like that Jake (who had only been with Sean willingly up to this point) shared him with many other in this chapter. Plus his resistance to tell Sean he loved him too was irritating. I hope Sean does not get his heartbroken as this story concludes.