All Comments on 'Shall We Dance? Ch. 01'

Well written, no obvious English errors, and sets up the next chapter nicely. Keep going.

I like it when the girls have bigger balls than male antagonists, gives me something to look forward to when the story gets dirty :)

Gave you a 5 and look forward to more!

Looking forward to the rest of the ride!

I read this part and thought that the second part would tell the reader what occurred between him and Lisa. Did he bed her as was implied? I thought that the second part would pick up from the first part but, he took off in a totally different direction with a completely different chick. I was extremely disappointed with Part 2. He needs to write a part 3 to show how he made out with lisa. I was so disappointed with part 2 i didn't even rate it. Get to your keyboard and start pounding the keys, Bubba.