All Comments on 'Shall We Dance? Ch. 02'

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johntcookseyjohntcookseyover 7 years ago
Wow - nice stuff

Don't know why I missed Ch. 01, but I went back and read both. I enjoyed them very much. Tight, clean style easy to follow, and well developed, believable characters for such a minimal format. Smooth effective dialogue also. I look forward to ensuing chapters. Thank you for sharing your art. *****

PleasepleasePleasepleaseover 7 years ago
Awesome!

Can't help but love those cowboy stories. Two fave parts were 1) Singing Willie and 2) the gal getting her due.

Fantastic dialogue. Now, hurry up with Chapter 3!!!

Seizeya1Seizeya1over 3 years ago

Yup....liken' it.....more please.

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