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Click here"Does that mean you might really give me a second chance? I swear, I will never be unfaithful or disrespectful to you ever again."
"Let's see how things go after we live in the same house again for a while. I'm not promising anything. Let's go slow and talk often."
"Can we snuggle together on the couch right now? I think I've missed those times the most. And then maybe. . ."
"Let's start with the snuggling."
Sheila kept her head on his shoulder and her arm around his waist. Good and bad memories zig-zagged in her brain. Finally, she spoke. "Kurt, I know you don't owe me a favor, but there is one favor I'd like."
"What's that?"
"Can I kill your brother, Cameron, for what he put me through? I've really been wanting to use those kitchen knives for something."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous2 months agoAwww. Let’s take a serious drama, and turn it into a campy comedy. You should have quit with part 1.
Alright_alright_alright4 months agoWhat a loser, read like a 13yr old wrote this after getting dumped.
Anonymousover 1 year agoNo real contrition on her part. No real change in her character. She still cheated and he’s forgiving her after everything she did? She is not worth it.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoCreative and dark story. Well written and grammar is proper. I cheated on him and lost all of my favorite people and things. I'd never be such a fool again, but it's too late.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI loved it!! Yet cringed as my peripheral vision sensed the last paragraph. You JUST squeaked by, but it was a close shave. She was far too flippant, far too soon. It didn't fit. It was too soon for her to relax like that. You have talent and ability, but that was sloppy.
JH4Funalmost 2 years agoUnlike most who read this and say ⭐⭐⭐as if that is a bad rating.
I am giving it ⭐⭐⭐, because I thought it was a good story.
I felt that the only way she was going to learn her lesson was to be hit by a ton of bricks. The ton you used were good and intricate to the sequel. As always your story was yours and for me it was a good one.
Keep Writing
JH4Fun
sbrooks103over 2 years agoUnderstanding her temptation is one thing, but her utter disrespect is unforgivable.
Anonymousover 2 years agoOnly a 3. This could have been a 5, but Sheila should have been forced into much more penance by Kurt. And he should definitely have gotten, or should get, some strange himself to make up for her and David. And get the divorce while there's nothing but debt to split up. Let's see how she likes 'dem apples! More or less the same plotline was handled so much better in "Cancer" by StangStar06.
usaretalmost 3 years agoOk, liked the cleanup ending. Much better than suicide. And appreciated,somewha for her terrible actions. Thanks.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI enjoyed the read. Cancer is hard on all concerned - wouldn't wish it on anyone. Thank you.
secretsalover 3 years agoBamboozled!
It feels like there could have been a way to handle Sheila's penance without pushing her into consummating the cheating (which is what Kurt did, one way or another). But if the cheating is ultimately lower on the list of grievances than the disrespect which preceded it, maybe these shenanigans work.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoKeep the divorce going as she is a weak person. No way should he say he understands her position as if he accepts the revenge fuck to David. Why wait for divorce because of Bills? Divorce and see how you end up sharing the cost. Her expense is on her for apartment or house etc. He makes it like all the debt is on him alone.
Also, how about he suggest she get a second boob job and reduce to an A cup or B cup? Get the flirty tit issue out of the way.
Wargamerabout 4 years agoNot bad, but this could have have been a truly excellent story with plot given. But somehow the finished tale just did not live up to expectation.. I think Skip felt this way too.
Scores 3/5
