Shame, the Sequel

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"Does that mean you might really give me a second chance? I swear, I will never be unfaithful or disrespectful to you ever again."

"Let's see how things go after we live in the same house again for a while. I'm not promising anything. Let's go slow and talk often."

"Can we snuggle together on the couch right now? I think I've missed those times the most. And then maybe. . ."

"Let's start with the snuggling."

Sheila kept her head on his shoulder and her arm around his waist. Good and bad memories zig-zagged in her brain. Finally, she spoke. "Kurt, I know you don't owe me a favor, but there is one favor I'd like."

"What's that?"

"Can I kill your brother, Cameron, for what he put me through? I've really been wanting to use those kitchen knives for something."

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AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

A bad story gone worse

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Awww. Let’s take a serious drama, and turn it into a campy comedy. You should have quit with part 1.

Alright_alright_alrightAlright_alright_alright4 months ago

What a loser, read like a 13yr old wrote this after getting dumped.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

No real contrition on her part. No real change in her character. She still cheated and he’s forgiving her after everything she did? She is not worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Creative and dark story. Well written and grammar is proper. I cheated on him and lost all of my favorite people and things. I'd never be such a fool again, but it's too late.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I loved it!! Yet cringed as my peripheral vision sensed the last paragraph. You JUST squeaked by, but it was a close shave. She was far too flippant, far too soon. It didn't fit. It was too soon for her to relax like that. You have talent and ability, but that was sloppy.

JH4FunJH4Funalmost 2 years ago
Good Story (3 Stars)

Unlike most who read this and say ⭐⭐⭐as if that is a bad rating.

I am giving it ⭐⭐⭐, because I thought it was a good story.

I felt that the only way she was going to learn her lesson was to be hit by a ton of bricks. The ton you used were good and intricate to the sequel. As always your story was yours and for me it was a good one.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

BSreaderBSreaderabout 2 years ago
Garbage

As a sequel its terrible sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

She is a PIG

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 2 years ago

Understanding her temptation is one thing, but her utter disrespect is unforgivable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Only a 3. This could have been a 5, but Sheila should have been forced into much more penance by Kurt. And he should definitely have gotten, or should get, some strange himself to make up for her and David. And get the divorce while there's nothing but debt to split up. Let's see how she likes 'dem apples! More or less the same plotline was handled so much better in "Cancer" by StangStar06.

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