All Comments on 'Shameless [Nathan Lloyd]'

Well written and thought out. I was hard every time I read some of it. Being bi and having been forced to admit it back in college, I could really relate. Thanks

This thing is like some kind of freight train straight out of hell, remorseless and just doesn't stop. So, Nate, what's it gonna be next time?

I want to leave a more thoughtful comment, but I'm afraid I have to *ahem* take care of some Business at the moment. Hot. As. Fuck.

From start to finish...just completely smokin', much like everything you write.

It's rare that I find a story that hits so many of my buttons AND be well written to boot! This was wonderful.

Loved it

Incredibly hot!! Was he house actually haunted?

A big wow on the non consent content, despite what the author claims below, non consent fantasies are definitely part of the BDSM variety, even when played out carefully. And risk aware playing at each others limits is salt and pepper for sex life.

I haven't been a big fan of the moral-inducing part of the story, it's simply patronising and therefore doesn't belong in adult fiction - in no fiction at all, in fact.

That one isn't supposed to force themselves onto someone for real isn't something that has to be said before or after writing a non consent story. It's not a how-to its a what-if and we all know its purely fictional.

I really liked the "turning Nate into bi-part". I can see where he's coming from and although it's clearly not possible if one is purely straight, I am very much into this line of fairytale.

This may be the darkest story I've ever read on this site. It really upset me. Was the house haunted? Who sent Vince? It would have been better if Nate had been less likeable or more mean-spirited, then it wouldn't have been as upsetting to see him raped by supernatural forces.