All Comments on 'Shannon Helps Her Cousin Rebound'

I really liked reading this. I’m nervous and shy and never experienced anything like this before or commented on anything.

I’m not really sure what to say, but thank you.

emma hit this right on!

That was good! Are you gonna write a 2nd part?

I really liked this one. Add to it, keep it going. PLEASE.... I was hoping that the cousins would hook up over his whole leave and then some.

Please more!!!!!!!

Well written and made me want to keep reading on

A one on one time with Shannon would be great. Shannon trying to claim him for herself. Keyword being trying.

That was damn good writing. I loved the slow build up and tease. I agree it definitely needs a part two.

Hope he has enough time at home for another chapter.

You should write another chapter. The story is really good. There is a lot more story. Please continue.

Shannon"s cousin has a long pass before he has to be back on base . Plenty of time for Shannon and her 2 best friends to help him get over being dumped by Kate.

Jimmy could take Heather for a long weekend to Wisconsin Dells which would involve them sharing a room and lots of sex .

There could also be a pool party at Sara's that could get real sexy .

This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read on this site. I hope to see more chapters.

Keep up the great work. Should be a great reunion of the four of them every time Jimmy comes home on leave!!

If you want to take the step to another level of authorship get a proof reader. You wrote a very good story, but it is marred by several typos that created misspelled words or in places the wrong word. Example; "of" instead of "off". Better luck with future stories, I look forward to reading them.

4 Stars, but write another chapter and I'll give it 5 Stars!

LOVED IT!! I really enjoyed how the story moved along at a good pace and loved the scenario the played out. I look forward to more stories by you.

(11/4/2022) This was a great read but how about a little drama involving his cheating ex-girlfriend and Shannon for a sequel? Five stars and this goes on my list.