All Comments on 'Shannon's Summer of Firsts'

I loved everything about your story. More!

I felt I knew both of them before they did it. They enjoyed it, I enjoyed it

Both parts of this story are great...well written and just the right amount of sex and story build up...keep going and let's see what else happened in 84...who breaks up with who and who stays together...ah the 80's

Absolutely beautiful! Your character development was superb and the intimate scenes felt totally real. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

Great job - I really enjoyed it and with a great sense of character and place.

Really well crafted story.

Great characters and wholly believable situation.

Looking forward to reading more of your work

Your first two stories are realistic, erotic, and cover the interests of eighteen-year-olds entering adulthood. I thoroughly enjoyed both stories. Keep up the good work.