All Comments on 'Shapeshifter Ch. 02'

This story isn't at all what I expected but I love it!

I've enjoyed reading these two chapters, but I'm curious as to how it ends. I noticed it's been a few months so I was hoping that you still plan on finishing this story. Thank you :)

I love this story! Please, please, please don't just leave it as it is. I'm bad enough with never finishing a story so please don't be like me!

Okay so this is the second time I read this story and it only makes me want to read it more. Please give your adoring fans more chapters to read. There's not enough were cat stories out there and yours is one of the better out there. Believe me I know because I looked even on other sites. Can't get enough so give us some more to make me purr. LOL

Sooo sorry for making you wait :) Same rules as in "Unwilling" apply here - I'm not gone, I've still got this story on my To-Do List, but I'm a godawfully slow writer. I'll try to pick up the slack!

First, you do an amazingly good job writing given English is not your first language. Much better than many people on here who only speak English :) I think I saw like two small mistakes through so far.

Anyway, like this story. It's intriguing. I would like you to tell us more about this society they are in and I just feel like Noom isn't what he's presenting. And I don't mean that he might be a shapeshifter too. I don't know if he's the thug he presents. I want to know what happened to Kel's mom. Was she a shapeshifter? Obviously the dad wasn't. I know cats tend to be solitary animals, but are their lots of shapeshifters out there? Are there any 'prides,' or whatever you wanna call them, out there? I'm loving the story, I think I just am hungry for more details. I know you mention the mafia moving into Babylon. I'd have liked to know what the structure of their society is. Is it a modern day place? Who was his dad? What does "Flatland's Inc." do? Is he in the mafia? Is he on anyone's radar for more than being a business owner with alot of money?:

It's well-done. I love the development of their relationship. I kinda like how unlike many stories where a shifter knows why his cat feels/thinks/acts like it does, he doesn't. It's clear that not knowing other shifters and hiding or being hidden all his life, he doesn't know enough to figure out why his cat likes Noom so much. I am thinking he is his mate. But, I still can't tell if he's shifter or human.

Look forward to reading more. Glad I found this late given everyone's upset over the time in between posts. I got to read three chapters at once that way :) Hope to see more soon.

I totally understand the slow writing thing - I'm no better (speedwise; talentwise, I'm not close to you!)