All Comments on 'Shared in a Hotel Room'

She's stepped out twice before on our marriage, each time bring us closer together.……

…,and that’s where I stopped reading and went straight to comments

Another sad simp. I wonder. Is this influx of Cuck loving writers a flow on from single mother homes, or has the woke MSM and progressive social media broken down these testosterone deficient males.

You are a lucky guy.

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I think the lucky ones are the ones who fuck the slut but mostly don't have to stay or take care of her afterwards.

There are the real lucky ones.

Not him. Certainly not him.

Another sicko tale posted by another sicko!

Why do you insist on trying to convince people that giving away your wife is a good thing?

A poor rendition of a cockolds influence over a slut wife. Don't bother writing such dribble.

Either I'm going nuts or... didn't I read this story a few weeks ago? Has it been reposted? We didn't hear about the DP that had been mentioned. Just one-on-one and mouth and pussy at the same time. But not arse and pussy together. Cheers.

She needs to get off birth control & let natural take its course. Let a bbc pump a baby in her. It’s always great to send a married women home full of cum & maybe even a baby.

"Ding" sound of wife checking out of marriage with a wimp who can't satisfy her. If he could he wouldn't share her and she wouldn't want to be shared!

Oops! Next, welcoming our little black baby. Oh, please, please, please!

Just no way any normal guy wants or likes this shit.

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Scary thing is that some, like this author, do. Ugh…..

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another very good story

Forget the naysayers and fetish shamers, and keep writing what you enjoy. That said, I'm going to be a technical shamer, and tell you that this was a mess, full of run-on sentences, punctuation errors, etc. Please find an editor.

Poor cuck is more disrespected than the usual pathetic wimps.

This has to be one lamest stories going I know you like to write unlike me but to write a story that is like so boring . Why at this moment in time you are just like all the rest of these newbies pointless all you are doing is writing the same old story but told by a different person. These stories are classed as quick to write and means nothing you have got a whole load of different category’s to try . So please go and try instead of just thinking of these lame quick to write stories go show people what you can write yourself. You have got a talent now go show people what you can do instead of these lame stories that only a few will like. Writing these stories gets you nowhere I want to see you challenge yourself and leave the loving wife category alone and try different category’s. I can see you have the words and the talent but you still not showing your full potential. So forget these cheap and easy to write garbage stories and go forth and so people what you can do ok

Mediocre telling of a detestable tale

These declarations of love for each other are lame and lacking in truth. These two don't know what love is and wouldn't recognize true love if they stared in it's face. Loving someone doesn't mean you share them because it's what they want. You are sharing your spouse means you're a miscreant of society, a self loathing individual. Someone who thinks allowing your wife to be reamed out by two men in the room next door strengthens your marital bonds. How is that accomplished? Because you get to "reclaim" her after? What does that even mean? The fact that this imbecile of a husband is angsting over the minutes his wife has spent on her round two tryst means he is subconsciously not happy with her behavior. He is concerned, and he should be. The next meet up they will likely result in her spending the entire night away from her husband. The one after that will just be her and the weekend away with her boytoy. Soon hubby won't be invited or encouraged to "reclaim" his wife. She doesn't need him now, she has seen that he really doesn't care about her as he has been giving her away to other men. She can do that herse! -- 1☆

My wife is a hotwife! I love it!

2 stars from me due to incorrect word usage (e.g., effect should be affect/ waive should be wave), made up words (compersion), misspelled words, numerous run on sentences, using quotation marks where none belonged, etc. I would humbly suggest that you find yourself a good editor.

Nope, don't want read anymore. Done with these sick fucks.

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It’s sad that out little pathetic trol has to whine little a fucking crybaby in the comments on every story. Whether he uses one of his various named accounts or posts anonymously, it’s easy to tell which comments are his. He’s the only one that bitches about free porn stories. What’s funny is he actually thinks he’s fooling people. Sorry fuckwad, we can tell every single post you make.

Great, my wife read this and wants the same thing for her birthday.

Would have preferred when she came home in the morning and he asked her about condoms then said “good thing your on birth control” she should have replied that she wasn’t and was at her fertile time then told him to fuck her and he’d have 33% chance to knock her up. Then in chapter 2 she finds she’s pregnant with twins and on giving birth one is white and one is black. Neither are her husbands. Then in chapter 3 we find he’s sterile when they want more kids so she meets each of then guys again alone and has two more babies by them. Hubby raises the kids. She gets her tubes tied and sees her lovers on a regular basis as they know they are the fathers and act as uncles to the kids but lovers for the wife.

There are some grammatical issues but my biggest complaint was the lack of detail. We needed to see her getting fucked and getting off, otherwise what's the point?

A person has to have very serious emotional and psychological issues to write and post this garbage.

What would be the point chapt 3? More cheating? More brainless banter? More pablum for intellectually and or emotionally challenged? These formula stories seem to be coming from a mimeograph machine, just crank them out without thought.

Excellent, I'm married to a sexy Hotwife as well.

Better in that at least you reclaimed her immediately, and didnt let her put you off for being too sore or tired. The cum slurping though is also very subservient and cucky. So that reduces the score.

A person has to have serious emotional and psychological issues to whine like a little bitch about fictional stories.

Hey Pervertedknight. I’ll bet you feel like a fool saying the author made up word. Compersion is definitely a word. Maybe try using a dictionary next time before you make a fool out of yourself by trying to feel superior.

LOS is trying too hard! An editor would help a lot! There is nothing in this portion of their sex-life’s story that hints at her chosen occupation. Sweetie gets an offer to have a surprise private (no Hubby) morning delight … which was a thoughtful gift. But it was just more of the same except for the condoms. And the wordsmithing is miserable. Words misspelled others omitted. GMAFBreak.

I'm not into sharing, so I can't really get excited.

Which one of the two said "she gasped"?

I was very disappointed in this story. "My news anchor wife shared in a hotel" is a fantastic writing prompt and it would have been nice to have read a STORY -- you know, with conflict and stuff -- which revolved around that theme.

I also expected better punctuation and structure from someone who knows of the word "compersion" and how to use it correctly.

I agree that finding an editor would be an asset.

Hey Anonymous, why hide behind an anonymous profile to criticize me instead of creating a profile, ya cheeky halfwit? And for your information, I DID consult both the online Merriam Webster dictionary and the online Free Dictionary because I was unfamiliar with the word "compersion" and wanted to see what it meant while I was reading this story. Both sites said that the word did NOT exist, and this is easily verified. I would therefore suggest that you are the fool for both not knowing how to use an online dictionary and then attacking me as an anonymous git in the comments section when you obviously don't know what you're talking about. And if you feel you are inferior to me, that is your problem. I stand by my critique because I am correct.

As much as I liked the story, I thought it lacked eroticism in key places. A play by play description of her interaction with 2 big cocks would have been nice. Instead you relied on the husband's reclaiming for that. Just lacked overall detail. For that reason I gave it 3 stars. I liked the 2 lead in stories better

re:PervertedKnight No editor could provide enough advice to make this story any better. It was trash/garbage from the first word to the last. Maybe this author should write better stories, instead of the usual swinging/sharing cuck shit that seems to dominate this category. All these get an automatic one star rating, no exceptions. No amount of correct grammar would make this story any better. Belongs in the trash can with 90% of the rest of the garbage posted in Loving Wives.

They had been married only 5 years and had two children. Assume she waited for her 1st anniversary to cheat. Also assume she goes off birth control a couple months before getting pregnant and waits a couple months after birth before hunting for strange cock. That means she was susceptible to an affair for only 2 years and had sex with two different men. That is one a year. In this story she added 2 more guys. She is a slut if there ever was one. How many guys does he not know of? By their 20th anniversary, she will easily be at 25 or more guys.

Formula drivel: "handsome black man and a white guy" (is the white guy not handsome?), 12 inch and 9 inch cocks on the guys (implication was clear which was the 12).

Total betrayal of his wife! She agreed to a 3some with her husband and another guy. The husband then added his own fetishes of bondage, interracial, and voyeurism without consulting her. Plus, he decided to be submissive and eat the other guys cum the next morning.

No wonder she stayed in the guy's room for almost 2 hours.

Who paid for these guys to travel from Edmonton to Banf? That is a long drive. The story did say the couple paid for the men's hotel room. Why the concern about being 'out of town? When she is on TV in Banf as well as in Edmonton.

The lack of condoms on day 2 was meaningless because it had been previously mentioned 3 times that the men had been screened for STI's.

The story was terrible.