by AuthorSarahJames
The person who commented first saying rubbish shouldn't even be on here I bet your about 12 because you dont understand when your reading a great story. But brilliant balance perfectly written I would say more but I dont have thr words for it although I will be reading more of your Stories Thankyou!
You did it again, you deliver a story that captivated me from start to finish, and what a nice finish it was. I quite liked the fast pace and it felt surprisingly well balanced and exciting all the way. And if your previous story is anything to go by then this will be a another great addition to LE. Now just to patiently wait for chapter two and for the mom to coin in on the fun!
First, the story needs a panties tag. I liked where this is going: the twins fucking mommy. I was slowly jacking my dripping cut cock with my wife's wet panties as I read your story. I need to cum so bad. I just want to shoot my jizz on Linda's sweet ass and watch Beth lick it up.
Enjoyed reading it and true to your words didn't leave us hanging at the end.
Chapter two should be very interesting now that they have had sex.
Can't wait to read more about Linda and the twins...keep them cumming!
well sarah jane can tell a good story. so vied , like shee is talking about her self
A great beginning. The ongoing interaction between these two, and adding mom, should be story fodder for some time. Well done.
Linda
This is an extremely erotic thread. I loved how Beth convinced Brett to start wearing panties! Then getting Linda to join in was great too. I am addicted to wearing panties too, especially one of my tight VS thongs......Mmmm !!! I have other feminine lingerie as well. I need to step into a dry thong before I read chapter three. I hope that you continue with this thread, and write many more chapters. Thanks.
SissyCrissy...................xoxoxo
Interesting turn about mom & sis
Is this story continued?
As a chapter 2? Or with a different name?
the WHOLE series!
I'll literally sell my soul to the devil for being the son/brother for just 1 day.....;)
When Brett brought Beth to a climax with his mouth it was just :That's it, Brett," Beth panted. "I'm cumming" and then on to the next part? Sounds more like she just finished eating an ice cream cone, "thanks, I'm done". Sure cut it short, no moaning, squeezing her legs on his head or anything. Well, some of the other sex was better but it sounds like Beth got short changed with her climax on that one.
I hope Brett matures quickly, I hate when the authors portray the males as a 12 year old. I enjoyed the story though.
Loved it! Nice people as characters, and I'd write more but I want to get to part 2. Thank you
Such a beautiful lecherous progression that only love can fulfill.
i have a pantie fetish so i loved the story,hard to find good pantie storys