All Comments on 'Shari Hails the Hero'

I've enjoyed this rewrite thank you. It shows how protective and loving Velma is . You got the scene where Eddie gets her comeuppance spit on in my view. Personally I like an age difference story and it works well with butch femme dynamic

Try writing a story about evil Eddie and her attempt to turn a straight girl gay

Really enjoyed the story, but part of me wanted to see Eddie successfully seduce Shari. I'd like to read some other stories about Eddie, I love her aggessive personality

Awesome. Loved how Velma is very protective and loving to Shari, and Shari is a very loyal and loving wife to Velma. Also expand some of the characters like Eddie finally getting her a young wife.

Another BEAUTIFUL Shari/Velma story! Always love reading their stories