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by GymTeacherYouDeserve

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Only_connectOnly_connectover 3 years ago

I'm afraid this is very poor writing.

dirtyricekingdirtyricekingover 3 years ago

So great that you're revisiting your stories! ALWAYS great to see new entries!

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
Fantastic!

You've taken a great story of yours (I loved the original), and made it even better. This is a perfect ending:

"Love often exceeds expectations. All it takes is patience and a little faith."

5 stars!

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Hello, and thank you so much for reading! My stories take place in the fictional city of Thatcher Blake. I prefer to read stories that take place in the past--before computers and cell phones took over our lives. I prefer to leave it up to you, the reader, to decide what yea...